How An Obama ‘State Of the Union’ Speech Is Born
President Barack Obama’s 2014 State of the Union speech has
been coming together, draft by draft, much of it springing from the mind of a
quick-witted 33-year-old with a below-ground West Wing office, an above-average
thirst for caffeine, and a passion for the 1985 Chicago Bears.
He’s no Raymond Price – the long-ago speechwriter for
Richard Nixon who famously wrote the first draft of the 1970 State of the Union
on a sleepless three-day blitz powered by “greenies,” amphetamines prescribed
by the White House doctor. Instead, in the wee hours, Keenan can make himself a
cup of coffee with a Keurig machine given to him by the National Security
Staff.
The big themes of Obama’s prime-time speech on Tuesday are
already broadly clear: The economy, the challenge of income inequality, his
health care overhaul, the Iran nuclear negotiations, and other issues.
But how do those items and the many smaller initiatives make
their way into Obama’s State of the Union address?
As early as December, policy aides prepare vast briefing
books – including background information on various domestic and foreign policy
priorities.
The first week of January, Obama huddles with senior adviser
Dan Pfeiffer, Palmieri, and Keenan to lay out the broad lines of what he wants
to say.
After that, the White House does its version of what might
be called “crowd-sourcing” – aides in charge of correspondence and outreach
collect individual Americans’ stories that might serve to illustrate the
policies highlighted in the speech.
Then the work to produce a first draft gets going. Producing
that first version generates most of the all-nighters.
The process gets a bit easier after that. Typically, the
team goes through about five or six drafts over the course of the week leading
up to the actual speech. Obama, who is heavily involved in the process, tends
to work on the speech at night.
The president talks to outside experts – he has reportedly
been consulting historians since at least 2011 to help him “find a language in
which he could address the problem of growing inequality without being accused
of class warfare.”
His edits to various drafts sometimes come in the form of
cramped but tidy notes in black pen on yellow legal pad paper. He’s been known
to cross out entire pages.
“By Sunday, the speech is generally locked in, in terms of
substance,” Keenan’s predecessor, Jon Favreau, told Yahoo News.
“We’re still making changes the day of, but they’re minor
rhetorical changes, or for tone, or policy fact-checks or research
fact-checks,” said Favreau, whose departure to start a communications firm set
the stage for Keenan’s elevation to the top speechwriting job.
The research team “keeps us honest,” he said, joking that
“you can’t say ‘Americans are the hardest-working people on Earth' because the
Swedes put in more hours.”
Obama’s involvement shifts over the course of the process,
from primarily being concerned about the broad themes and policy initiatives to
poring over the language down to the placement of individual semi-colons.
But “the only ritual he really has before every big speech,”
Favreau said, is that “he needs just a couple of minutes of complete ‘alone
time,’ when no one is asking him anything or talking at him, when he can just
collect his thoughts.”
Keenan explained in an interview with Yahoo News last year
what it’s like when you disagree with a presidential edit – when you tell the
most powerful man in the world that he’s wrong about what he should say.
“At this point, you know, I don’t push back aggressively,
but I can argue pretty well for a point. I’d say the first couple of years I
wouldn’t dare to do that,” he said.
Keenan admitted he “rarely” wins those arguments.
“And when you do, he never lets you forget that you made him
take out something he liked,” Keenan said with a chuckle.
So what’s going to be in it?
State of the Union speeches are frequently lampooned – “I
come before you tonight to speak in ringing tones and stare into the middle
distance.” They can include dramatic calls for action that never generate any
(a return to the Moon by 2020 to set up a manned mission to Mars?). Senators
get in on the act by making a big show of sitting with someone of the other
party. Senators seem to enjoy that seating arrangement, but it’s like the
political equivalent of a comb-over: It looks weird and fools no one.
The White House has already showed a little leg, indicating
that Obama will make a renewed push for immigration reform, call for raising
the minimum wage and extending unemployment benefits, some kind of climate
change push, and deliver a warning that when Congress won’t act, he will seek
to use his executive powers.
But the president’s recent schedule offers clues to other
policy initiatives that don’t cost much and could get bipartisan support –
classic State of The Union fodder.
On Wednesday, Obama formally accepted a bipartisan
commission’s assessment on how to make voting easier. He also met with the
White House Council of Women and Girls to receive their report “Rape and Sexual
Assault: A Renewed Call to Action” and announced the creation of a White House
“Task Force to Protect Students from Sexual Assault.” Last week, he and first
lady Michelle Obama convened a White House summit on college accessibility and
affordability.
On the day of the speech, Obama will surely follow the
tradition of having special guests join first lady Michelle Obama – Americans
whose story helps him illustrate his points. Those guests are known as
“Skutniks,” named for Lenny Skutnik, whom then-president Ronald Reagan invited
to attend the 1982 State of the Union in honor of his heroic response to the
crash of Air Florida Flight 90 into the Potomac two weeks earlier.
Will the speech work? That’s a whole other story
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